Sunday, August 26, 2012

Peer Feedback #1

Most of the peer feedback is under the comments section of the essays post

1 comment:

  1. I like the first essay. Well structured, well written, and ideas are written out clearly. Paragraphs are set up well, and the essay reads nicely. The one thing I'd say to do is to change up the sentence structure a little bit more at the end. You start several sentences all with "Eliot" and by trying different wording it would improve the essay overall. Well done though